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3...2...1! by fleurchien 3...2...1! by fleurchien
Good grief...it took me 4 days for three measly busts!

I have a good excuse though.
I'm trying to refine and change my style a bit. AoEx has really inspired me to clean my drawings up a bit, and to stop drawing them in bland poses.

So I tried to make Fran look like she's saying "3, 2, 1!"
The mouth and the hair were the hardest parts for me to figure out o3o;; It's my first time trying to draw "chunky" hair vs my previous "wispy" hair style.
NOT TO MENTION SHADING IT, AH MA GAH.

I also told myself that I should try and use bolder colors, since I tend to pale out my stuff too much ><

/rant rant rant!

(EDIT: Forgot her crown >< )
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xVictoriousSunset Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is reaally pretty art! :D
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Fawkes-Winchester Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Would you like some constructive criticism?
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fleurchien Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes please *o*
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Fawkes-Winchester Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is what I think:
The hair looks lovely, no problems there. The mouth looks fine too, I will add.
The only thing that's off is her hand, especially in the first panel, mostly the 3 middle fingers that look like they're further away from the base hand than they should be.
Also, the thumb and the pinky in my opinion should be touching, because if they're not...well, just try to show 3 with your fingers without the thumb to support the pinky; difficult isn't it?
I'm being nitpicky, I know. Overall it's a lovely picture with potential for improvement c:
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fleurchien Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, yes, I understand *o* I have such a hard time drawing hands, blarglarglargl! ><
I appreciate it though! I'll keep practicing!
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Fawkes-Winchester Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You think you're the only one? x3
I struggle like you wouldn't believe with hands, they're awful! And feet! My god, the feet!
In any case, don't let criticism ever discourage you from doing what you do, don't be afraid to experiment and let nobody outright tell you how you should draw (This is advice and opinion, not demands) and remember that you are the master of your own art :nod:
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coreli1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
wow so cute!!! love the whole idea!
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fleurchien Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*o*
Oooh thank you :3
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estra-chan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
how cute is that!! <3 omg~ I love it <3
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fleurchien Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ehehehe :3
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